大連朗閣劍7解析系列 -《劍橋雅思7》寫作真題原創(chuàng)高分范文

朗閣劍7解析系列 -《劍橋雅思7》寫作真題原創(chuàng)高分范文

《劍橋雅思7》Test 3 Writing Task 2的考題實(shí)際上就是中國大陸06年10月28日的考題，原文原題，一個(gè)字不差。朗閣雅思寫作教材《最新雅思高分范文集》（第四版和第五版）里就有該題的原創(chuàng)范文。雖然不是考官滿分作品，但也可算作是一篇高分范文了。摘錄于此，供廣大雅思考生參考學(xué)習(xí)。 

WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.

What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

考題解釋：

對(duì)大多數(shù)人來說，成年生活主要是在工作中度過的，因此工作滿意對(duì)于個(gè)人的幸福來說是一個(gè)非常重要的因素。有哪些因素導(dǎo)致工作滿意？如果讓所有的員工對(duì)自己的工作都感到滿意，這樣的期待有多現(xiàn)實(shí)？

考題難點(diǎn)：

本題的難點(diǎn)主要在于第二個(gè)問題的理解“How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?”它的精確含義應(yīng)該是“讓所有的員工都對(duì)自己的工作感到滿意，這樣的期望有多現(xiàn)實(shí)？”。很多考生會(huì)由于這個(gè)問題不能精確理解而導(dǎo)致寫作偏題。

類似考題：

Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

原創(chuàng)范文

A job provides the worker with the necessary means to remain satisfied in almost every aspect of life such as leisure, health, and social life. Consequently, finding a satisfying and motivating job is essential for improving an individual’s overall quality of life, and several key factors are thought to be critical for an employee to achieve job satisfaction.

A reasonable salary is of course the most likely contributor to job satisfaction. In many people’s minds, an ideal job is first of all a well-paid one, which makes the employee feel that he is fairly rewarded for what he has done for the company. Another important element of job satisfaction is the nature of the job itself. Job satisfaction can never be achieved if the work is boring, or if the work is ill-suited to the employee’s education, skills and interests. Finally, job satisfaction is closely associated with being part of the decision-making process in the company as well as having opportunities for promotion.

However, it is very difficult for a company to ensure that all its employees are satisfied with their job. The main reason is that different people have different definitions of job satisfaction. Some people may care salary more than opportunities for promotion. Others may never tolerate a boring task. Also, in the wild chase for quicker and higher profits, ensuring workers’ job satisfaction has become only a secondary or even non-existent goal for many employers.

In conclusion, increasing workers’ job satisfaction can be a challenge for an employer, but for an individual employee, finding the right job and trying to stay positive might be the first step towards achieving job fulfillment and satisfaction.

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重點(diǎn)詞句解析

motivate

v.激發(fā)

He is genuinely motivated by a desire to help people.

consequently

adv.從而, 因此

I spent most of my money in the first week and consequently had very little to eat by the end of the holiday.

critical

adj. 重要的

The President's support is critical (to this project).

ideal

adj.理想的, 完美的, 想象的, 觀念的, 唯心論的

The television also comes in a compact 36 cm screen size, ideal for bedroom or kitchen use.

promotion

n.促進(jìn), 提拔, 晉升

The job offers excellent promotion prospects.

secondary

adj. 第二的;第二位的,附屬的

Many older people still believe that women's careers are secondary.

fulfillment

n.  滿足(感),成就(感)

People find fulfillment in working for a common goal.

several key factors are critical for…

在“分析解決”型的雅思議論文寫作中，幾乎都會(huì)需要寫到“有幾條因素導(dǎo)致……的問題”這樣的概念，范文中的這個(gè)句式值得讀者學(xué)習(xí)：

Consequently, finding a satisfying and motivating job is essential for improving an individual’s overall quality of life, and several key factors are thought to be critical for an employee to achieve job satisfaction.

critical也可以用essential代替，例如：

Three factors are essential for keeping your bones healthy throughout your life
 

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