1 Introduction 引言段范例
.. I write in response to your invitation to guest swho have recently stayed in your hotel to suggest ways in which you can improve your service.
.. Yesterday you asked us to write and give you feedback on your lectures. Therefore, I haveout lined my thoughts below.
2 Main Body 主題段范例
.. I found that the level of customercare was excellent. Indeed, every member of your staff,form the manager to the maid, was, without exception, extremely polite and helpful. Andthe standard of the rooms was beyond what Iexpected.
.. I found that the restaurant stopped serving breakfast at 8:30 am. As
I was on holiday I wouldhave liked to take breakfast at around 9:00 o'clock, but was unable to do so. I also spoke toseveral other guests who expressed the same disappointment.
.. Additionally, I feel that if you could supply Chineselanguage newspapers, the quality of stay forMandarin speakers would be considerably enhanced.
.. It might be a good idea to make stricter traffic rules and regulations on speeding.
.. May I suggest the local council invite the traffic control authority and representatives of the commuters to discuss the possible solutions?
3 Closing 結(jié)束語范例
.. I hope that the authorities concerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best as they can.
.. Looking forward to your reply.
.. I’d like to thank you for the interest you are taking in your students and look forward to your next lecture.
.. I trust you will consider my suggestions carefully.
.. I hope you will fi nd my suggestions useful.