2011年1月22 號雅思大作文真題范文
——Written by Clement
真題題目：
There are an increasing number of anti-social behaviors in recent years; People generally believe that the society is to blame. What do you think the causes are and who is responsible for this?
經(jīng)典范文：
Throughout much of the world, rapid proliferation of antisocial behaviors seems to be an increasingly widespread problem. The public cry for more prisons and tougher sentences outweighs prevention and treatment of criminal acts. However, it is more urgent to identify the underlying root causes, rather than to deal with the symptoms through punishment measures
The most common factor responsible for crimes is poverty. People who cannot afford to make their own ends meet are very likely to commit crimes as a last resort. It goes without saying that poor and unemployed individuals have much higher likelihood of committing crimes. Exposure to violence is another factor that contributes to crimes, especially youth crimes. Without proper parental guide, some young adults get deeply addicted to the Internet and become heavy net users. Some of them are contaminated by violence and pornography online, which is closely linked to their aggressive behaviors.
Crime prevention requires the joint efforts from the entire society. The government should popularize education and create more jobs. The availability of education and job opportunities would allow citizens to secure employment and earn regular income, thereby reducing the crime rate to a minimum. To tackle youth crime, parents should play more supportive and loving roles, attaching more importance to their children’s emotional needs and limiting their access to unfavorable contents on the Internet by creating more interesting after-school entertainment
To sum up, this unpleasant phenomenon can be attributed to several factors, including poverty and lack of parental supervision. The government should take more effective measures to raise living standards of those economically impoverished individuals and parents should give correct and immediate instruction to young adults. (274 Words)
考題類型：報告類； 話題分類：犯罪類；
難度系數(shù)：三星
名師點評：
報告類的話題終于在開年第三次考試粉墨登場, 再加上披著犯罪類的外衣, 一定讓不少烤鴨叫苦不迭。但這不算是一道犯罪類的難題, 因為犯罪的原因和負責人完全可以從生活角度入手分析。
范文分析：開頭段用三句話分別描述背景,并引出本文的寫作目的。主體第一段闡述了犯罪的兩個原因(經(jīng)濟窘迫和過多的暴力接觸), 后者主要關(guān)注青少年犯罪。主體第二段針對上述兩個原因提出了解決方案(分別是: 普及教育創(chuàng)造更多工作機會和加強父母情感關(guān)懷)。結(jié)尾段重申了原因和解決方案。
本次犯罪類考題不難。該類考題一般每年出現(xiàn)兩次左右, 害怕犯罪類的烤鴨可以減少些許擔憂了。
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